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Sunday, 19 April 2015
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Tuesday, 31 March 2015
Mirrors - Music Video - TV Version
Though many people opt to view music videos online on sites such as YouTube and Vevo, there are also other ways people can view music videos.
One of these ways is through TV channels that specifically air music videos. The biggest of these, and arguably the reason why music videos have become so popular, is MTV. For this reason, I have made another version of my music video with the title of the song and the artist's name at the beginning and end of the video. This is a convention of music videos aired on television, but not of videos posted online, therefore I have made two versions of my video to reflect this.
Friday, 27 March 2015
Thursday, 26 March 2015
Monday, 23 March 2015
Draft Evaluation - Q1-4
1. In what ways
does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real
media products?
I feel that
my media products both challenged and conformed to conventions of real media
products. As Justin Timberlake is a successful R&B artist, I wanted to
include a performance element in the music video, as the artist’s face will,
ultimately, promote the song. The styling of the images used on the digipak and
poster is similar to that in the video. This creates a cohesive image that is
important not only for the star’s image, but also for a cohesive album look.
My decision
to create a narratively driven music video, in which the performer was not
playing a character, was rooted in Justin Timberlake’s success level. As an
R&B artist, it would be conventional to use Timberlake as the main focus of
the video. Though he is featured as a performer, there are four other people
who feature in the video almost as consistently as Timberlake himself.
I have
chosen to challenge this convention as Timberlake is an incredibly successful
artist and even ‘JT’ can be enough for audiences to identify the involvement of
Justin Timberlake. His initials alone are a powerful promotional tool.
Therefore, it is more important for the music video to be interesting and
thought-provoking in order to generate excitement about the video. The audience
have seen Timberlake perform; they have seen Timberlake act (in his hiatus from
music he had a very successful movie career). Therefore, something different
needs to be created in order to hold the audience’s interest.
The image
used on the poster is a MS of the performer looking towards the light. The low
key lighting means that one side of his face is brightly lit and the other is
shadowed. This suggests that there is a spotlight on him, reinforcing his
importance as the star. The black background and black and white suit, gives the
image a black and white theme. This has connotations of retro and vintage
styles, which relates to the throwback ‘neosoul’ genre of ‘The 20/20
Experience’. This retro theme is continued into the styling in all three
products. The performer wears a black suit, white shirt and black tie. This
smart attire is reminiscent of old R&B performers.
Within the
music video there are four characters. The video aims to highlight the similarities
within their differences by giving them each very similar narrative threads.
Each character, through seeing their reflection, writes the insecurities they
feel about themselves on the mirror. This aims to quite literally illustrate
the idea that looking in the mirror reminds people of their insecurities.
At the
beginning of the video, the audience are introduced to the four characters. The
set used for ‘The Heartbroken Guy’ has several stereotypically feminine
touches, which hint at a female’s presence in his life. For example, there is a
flower on the bedside cabinet, a picture above the bed of flowers and the wall
colour is lilac. The jump cut, in which ‘The Heartbroken Guy’ changes position
on the bed multiple times, suggests that he is restless. This, combined with
the mise-en-scene, begins to indicate that a girl may have left him.
The
introductory shots of ‘The Shopaholic’ are a series of CUs of different body
parts. For example, there is a CU of her feet, her hand opening the car door
and her shopping bags.
Though there
are moments that aim to create similarity between the characters, there are
also elements of the video that strive to highlight their differences. This is
seen particularly in the costumes. ‘The Outsider’ is dressed very differently
to ‘The Heartbroken Guy’. Most specifically, ‘The Outsider’ wears a bow tie,
which the audience is drawn to through the mid-close up of the actor as he
settles it. This shot is shown at the beginning of the video and is repeated at
the end. Bow ties outside of a formal ‘black tie’ context are commonly
associated with people who are ‘geeky’ or have eccentric style. In contrast,
the other male character is wearing a shirt, but the top buttons are undone and
it is untucked. As the character has had his heart broken, it is a stereotype
for him to care less about his appearance.
All four
characters wear neutral coloured costumes, predominantly grey, beige or brown. These
aim to reflect the unhappiness of the characters. These colours also display
their insecurity and lack of confidence, as wearing bright colours is generally
associated with confidence and extroversion.
The female
characters have two costumes; a neutral coloured outfit and a bright dress. At
the beginning of the video, ‘The Shopaholic’ is seen in a neutral costume.
Midway through the first chorus, a MS shows she has changed into a pink dress.
In contrast, ‘The Model’ is initially shown in a LS of a photo shoot, in which
she is wearing a strapless multi-coloured dress. Midway through the first
chorus, a MS shows she has changed into a light grey crop top and dark grey
denim shorts. The females represent a distinct binary opposite in terms of
their attitudes towards appearance. Stereotypically, a model is perceived to be
materialistic, fake and vain as, ultimately, their career is dependent on their
good looks. However, in the video, I decided to break convention to portray a
character who feels that the perfection created for photo shoots is false and
unattainable because she is made to look better through make-up and
manipulation of the images. For this reason, ‘The Model’ is depicted taking off
her make-up as she looks into the mirror in a combination of CUs and MSs.
This is
juxtaposed with ‘The Shopaholic’, who feels she needs make-up to feel happy with her appearance. Therefore, Mid-CUs
depicts ‘The Shopaholic’ putting on her make up.
Cutting
quickly between mid-close ups of ‘The Model’ and ‘The Shopaholic’ as they do
the opposite actions creates a distinct binary opposite between the two
characters.
The video
clearly comments on the distorted idea of perfection the media has created, and
it is unconventional for music videos to portray a message to their audience. Also,
the convention of music videos, as outlined by Mulvey, is to sexualise the
females within a music video. However, I have chosen to avoid doing this with
my video. Breaking convention in this way is rarely seen in music videos for
chart music, as this is a risk for artists who are striving to reach success or
grow their success. However, as an artist firmly established in the music
industry, it is possible for Timberlake to break convention as there is a
degree of safety in each of his releases.
The studio
set up used for the shots of my performer aim to create a distinction between
the narrative and performance elements of the video. The low key lighting and
black background suggests that there is a spotlight on the performer. This
highlights his importance within the video and as a successful star.
The video
has a cyclic narrative, ending with shots similar to the beginning. Therefore,
there is no ‘resolution’ at the end, indicating that their problems are hidden,
and they continue their lives still feeling the way they did at the beginning.
Therefore, this symbolises how everyone has an insecurity, they just might not
show it. As a popular artist with a wide target audience, this video would
appeal to the mainstream audience, as it is attempting to comment on an issue
that affects many people and that the audience would relate to.
2. How
effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts?
When
creating my ancillary texts, I considered the fact that I was creating a
digipak for an album of songs and the poster was promoting this. My main
product, the music video, is only a promotional device for one of the singles
off the album, specifically, ‘Mirrors’. Therefore, I aimed to create ancillary
texts that had some connections to the music video, but did not feel like they
were specifically promoting the single, as this is not conventional of real
media products.
The video
has elements that are easily identifiable as being similar to the digipak and
poster. For example, the font used at the end of the video is the same as the
one used on the other products. Also, the images used are of a similar style to
the shots of the performer in the music video.
Dressing the
performer in a suit, white shirt and black tie and having this look consistent
throughout all of the products, creates an identifiable image and style. I
chose this look as it reflects stage Timberlake was at in his career when
releasing The 20/20 Experience. The album, classified as ‘neo-soul’, marked a
much more mature sound compared to his previous involvement in music. His
comeback was also marked with the success of the album’s lead single ‘Suit
& Tie’. Therefore using a suit and tie as the costume for his next video
creates consistent image that the audience will identify with. Also, this
contributes to the cohesiveness of The 20/20 Experience. Furthermore, the genre
‘neo-soul’ is an old sub-genre of soul music. Therefore, it has retro
connotations which could lead into the artist’s styling. In this way, a suit
and tie is an appropriate costume choice.
The main
purpose of the digipak is to communicate who the artist is and what genre the
music is. The digipak I have created aims to do this. The image of the artist
appeals to fans who are likely to buy the album. Timberlake has a largely
female fan, and his career began in the boy band ‘N-Sync’. Therefore, a large
part of Timberlake’s marketing involves his appearance, and using his face as a
marketing device.
Furthermore,
his face is easily identifiable which means that someone viewing the product is
likely to recognize him, indicating who the artist of the album is. Another way
I have attempted to communicate this is through the letters ‘J’ and ‘T’ being
bigger than the rest of the name. The initials are synonymous with the name
‘Justin Timberlake’. Therefore, ‘JT’ promotes the fact that it is a Justin
Timberlake album.
The genre of
the album, ‘neo-soul’, is sub-genre of R&B music that is heavily based in
soul music and is often a throwback to when soul music was very popular in the
60s. Therefore, the sound of the album has retro connotations, to artists such
as Ray Charles and Sam Cooke, which a suit and tie would be associated with. Also,
the black background, black and white costume and white text creates a black
and white theme. Again, this links to the retro connotations of the album,
communicating what sound the consumer should expect.
The poster
is promoting the digipak. It needs to create excitement around the album,
encouraging people to purchase it. Therefore I have used the phrase “his highly
anticipated return to music, as The 20/20 Experience was released by Timberlake
after a long hiatus from music, and previous to this break Timberlake was
incredibly successful. There is a lot of cohesion between the digipak and the
poster, using a similar font and image. The initials JT are positioned in the
same way they are on the digipak. This aims to create an easily identifiable logo
for Justin Timberlake. It is common for artists to have a ‘logo’ that makes
their name more recognizable to audiences. Often, this can use their whole
name. However, as Justin Timberlake is successful enough to have his initials
used as a promotional tool. This is similar to the eventual substitution of the
name ‘Michael Jackson’ for the initials ‘MJ’. In fact, Timberlake one the
Michael Jackson Video Vanguard Award at the VMAs for his lifetime achievement.
The music
video is specifically promoting the song ‘Mirrors’. To create a connection
between my ancillary and main products, I used the same font for the title
‘Mirrors’ at the end of the video. I also used the same set up when shooting
with the performer, so that his parts of the video would connect to the images
used on the poster and digipak.
To promote
the song ‘Mirrors’, I aimed to create a concept that took the title of the song
in a very literal sense. However, as the meaning of the song could have
multiple interpretations, I aimed to take music video in a less obvious
direction. Therefore, the lyrics “if you ever feel alone and the glare makes me
hard to find, just know that I’m always parallel on the other side” suggest
that Timberlake is there for his fans if they ever feel alone/sad. Though the
lyrics may more obviously be interpreted as a romantic relationship, taking the
video in another direction will make it more interesting to the audience, as it
is not the expected interpretation.
Furthermore, attaching a deeper meaning to the video creates a
discussion point around the video. This could, in turn, create more hype around
the song and, ultimately, encourage more people to buy it.
This is
particularly important as ‘Mirrors’ is the second single off ‘The 20/20
Experience’, by which time most hard-core fans will have purchased the album,
and therefore are unlikely to purchase the single ‘Mirrors’ upon its release.
Another way in which I have attempted to improve ‘Mirrors’ change of success is
by creating a special edition of ‘The 20/20 Experience’ released specifically
to promote the release of ‘Mirrors’. This would include the music video, and an
exclusive live version of the song. This would encourage fans who have already
purchased the album to gain the extra content.
3. What have
you learned from your audience feedback?
When evaluating the complete
product, it is important to gain audience feedback as, ultimately, the product
is being made to appeal to that audience. Therefore, if you receive criticisms
from your target audience it is in your best interest to modify this.
The target audience for my media
products are fans of Justin Timberlake. Due to Timberlake’s success as part of
the boy band N-SYNC and his current success as a solo R&B artist, products
made to promote Timberlake need to target the large age range of between 18-40
years old. This audience would be predominantly female, as Timberlake has made
it onto People Magazine’s prestigious Sexiest Men Alive list multiple times. In
fact, prior to the announcement of last year’s list, Timberlake became
Twitter’s front runner for taking the title. As a consistently chart topping
artist and member of former boy band NSYNC, Timberlake appeals to a primarily
mainstream market. He is particularly expensive to see live, therefore,
Timberlake is likely to appeal to an ABC1 social bracket, as they are more
likely to afford tickets to his concerts. Though Timberlake appeals
predominantly to females, he also has a male fan base, therefore males of a
demographic were also considered when making my music video.
I gained audience feedback in
several ways, including a survey, focus group and the use of social media
platforms. Some of the feedback was helpful, whilst some was not so easy to
generate meaning from.
For example, sharing my video on
the social network, Facebook, generated quantitative data in the form of
‘likes’ and qualitative data in the form of comments. Likes generally weren’t
useful, as I was unable to find out what
the audience liked about the video. Comments were slightly more helpful.
Comments such as “very good”, suggested they liked the video, whereas comments
regarding its professionalism were more helpful in understanding what the
audience liked about the video.
Data collected from SurveyMonkey,
through which I created a survey that I asked my target audience to complete,
gathered a largely positive response, with 100% of respondents answering that
the video was “very professional”. The survey collected both quantitative and
qualitative data. Through the qualitative data, I found that many audience
members responded well to the narrative, with comments including “interesting
narrative”, “interesting concept” and “WOW! Very professional and tells a
story. Helped me really listen to the lyrics.”
Through the qualitative data, I
also found that the performer was a strong element within the video, and this
was supported in the quantitative results. 75% of respondents chose the
performer as one of the most interesting parts of the video. Also, 87% regarded
the lip syncing to be “very believable”, with the remaining respondents viewing
it as “believable”.
When asked if the video
represented Justin Timberlake’s image appropriately, 100% of respondents
replied with “Yes”. Optional elaborations included “the suit is closely related
to JT”. The inclusion of “JT” in reference to Timberlake supports my choice to
use the initials on the digipak and poster to promote the artist.
All respondents believed the
music video to be “appropriately cohesive” with the ancillary products, and
this was confirmed by the response of the focus group who, upon seeing the products,
also believed them to be similar, but not too similar.
However, a constructive criticism
I received was that the image on the back cover of my digipak was difficult to
see. As I was trying to create a silhouette, in which the outline of the
performer is lit, one member pointed out that this was not clear enough. I
responded to this feedback by editing the image, so that the outline was much
whiter and more visible from a distance.
Lastly, as I uploaded my music
video to YouTube, I have benefited from its own analytics system. Most
specifically, this has enabled me to get a relative audience retention report,
which tells me, on average, how much parts of the video held the audience’s
interest compared to other videos of a similar length. As most music videos are
around the length of mine, if not shorter, this was an important feedback.
Therefore, I was pleased to find that my video held an above average to high
level of audience retention throughout the video. However, I found the biggest
dip in audience retention occurred during the final chorus, in which ‘The
Outsider’ falls to the ground. Therefore, this part of the video seemed to be
holding my audience’s attention the least. I then adjusted that part of the
video so that there were some shots of the other characters between the shots
of ‘The Outsider’, as this feedback made me realize that this section of the
music video focused largely on ‘The Outsider’. The audience retention report
also told me that the part of the video that held the audience’s attention most
was when the characters wiped the words off the mirrors. As this is the main
concept of the video, I felt that this feedback was a positive response to the
video.
4. How did you
use media technologies in the construction and research, planning and
evaluation stages?
Digital
technology was vital to the creation of my products. The digital nature of the
process, gave me a lot of convenience compared to the more traditional analogue
process. For example, DSLRs are much smaller than a film camera. They also
allow me to play back my footage and delete anything that didn’t work to create
more space. Also, the use of software such as Adobe Premiere Pro CS6 enabled me
to make many quick cuts between multiple narratives without having to manually
cut and stick together film frames.
In the
research part of the process, using the internet was vital. YouTube acted as an
extensive library of music videos for me to access, watch and analyse to gain
inspiration for my own video. Also, through watching other music videos, I was
able to identify conventions and how frequently these conventions were broken.
This allowed me to decide how conventional I wanted my own video to be.
The DSLR had
many features that contributed to the overall professionalism of my video. For
example, when shooting with my performer, I used a lens with a higher aperture
as this meant I could shoot with a lower ISO and the footage would not appear
grainy.
When
shooting on location with my four characters I was shooting from varying
distances, therefore an 18-55mm zoom lens was vital for me to be able to frame
my shots exactly how I intended. For example, in some of the locations, such as
the bedrooms, were restricted on space, therefore I needed to be able to zoom
out.
Digital
technology was also important in the editing process, using Adobe Premiere Pro
to edit my music video enabled me to cut between multiple shots, lip-sync
accurately and colour correct the footage.
Through the
colour correcting I was able to highlight the distinction between the shots at
the beginning which were more vibrant in colour, and the shots at the end that
were more desaturated. Using the saturation effect, I was able to depict the
characters’ distress by lowering the saturation of the shots so that they
looked more grey and dull. With earlier shots, I was able to increase the
saturation so that the shots were much brighter than the original. That was
particularly visible in the LS of the photoshoot, in which there are many
colours (green foliage, multi-coloured dress and red hair).
The
saturation tool also allowed me to correct shots of the performer where the
bright white lights had washed him out slightly. This gave his face more
colour, making the shots look more true to life. I also used the brightness and
contrast effect on shots of the performer so that the wall behind was not so
visible creating an infinity black background.
In the
production stage of making my music video, lighting also contributed to
creating the infinity black background. I used a set-up of four lights, one of
which being a soft box. There was a light in each corner around the performer,
pointed towards him. This caused a spotlight affect, so that the performer was
better lit than the background. This meant that even when darkening the footage
to darken the background, the performer was still clearly visible in the shot.
In the
post-production process, using Photoshop contributed to the professionalism of
my ancillary tasks, as Adobe Photoshop is an industry standard piece of
software. This allowed me to create layers upon which I could place text and
images each upon a separate layer. This meant that I could edit each layer
separately. Therefore, I could manipulate images within the document without
affecting the rest of the layers. For example, on the back of my digipak, I
have a silhouette image of my performer. Though there was an outline around the
performer in the original image, this was quite faint. Therefore, I used the
brush tool very lightly to increase the white outline so that it is more visible on the image. This helped to create
the effect I was hoping to achieve on the final digipak.
Production Log - Final Improvements to Music Video
I now in a position where my music video is complete, and I am fine tuning it so that it is as effective as possible. My audience retention feedback on YouTube has told me that people lose interest in my video towards the end, where the video focuses largely on 'The Outsider' played by Zak. Therefore, I am going to edit the video so it includes more of the other characters and is not just focused on 'The Outsider'. I feel that this will help to hold people's interest during this part of the video.
Friday, 20 March 2015
Production Log - Improvements to Special Edition
I have created a draft of my Special Edition digipak (that would be released to promote 'Mirrors', the album's second single). However, I received feedback from a fellow student that the red text on the inside of the digipak is too bright, and this made it look like the image was 'stuck onto' the digipak.
Upon reflection, I can see what they mean, and I feel that I will need to darken the red of the text in order to make the text and image fit better together.
Thursday, 19 March 2015
Wednesday, 18 March 2015
Tuesday, 17 March 2015
Production Log - Poster & Digipak Improvement
Over the last few days, I have been making improvements to my poster and digipak.
Though I liked the pose of my model and the lighting of the image, it was slightly soft, and this was very visible when compared with the rest of the poster. Therefore, I looked through my images again to see if there were any that suited the poster. I finally decided on using an image that is very similar to the one I used on the inside of my digipak, but a slight variation on the pose. This image looks much more professional than the previous image as it is much sharper, but the lighting is very similar to the image I had on my poster initially.
For the digipak, I have considered doing a 'Deluxe Edition' specifically for the promotion of Mirrors. The disk tray will contain images from the music video itself. I have also considered writing the words that the characters write on the mirror across the inside cover of the digipak. As it is a 'Deluxe Edition' and will be used as a promotion of the song 'Mirrors', the edition will include the music video and a live performance of the song.
Though I liked the pose of my model and the lighting of the image, it was slightly soft, and this was very visible when compared with the rest of the poster. Therefore, I looked through my images again to see if there were any that suited the poster. I finally decided on using an image that is very similar to the one I used on the inside of my digipak, but a slight variation on the pose. This image looks much more professional than the previous image as it is much sharper, but the lighting is very similar to the image I had on my poster initially.
For the digipak, I have considered doing a 'Deluxe Edition' specifically for the promotion of Mirrors. The disk tray will contain images from the music video itself. I have also considered writing the words that the characters write on the mirror across the inside cover of the digipak. As it is a 'Deluxe Edition' and will be used as a promotion of the song 'Mirrors', the edition will include the music video and a live performance of the song.
Tuesday, 10 March 2015
Focus Group Questions
- What are your initial thoughts about the video?
- Do you think that the narrative was clear and easy enough to follow?
- Do you feel that the performer's costume was effective and in keeping with JT's image?
- How professional did you find the use of camera and lighting?
- How professional did you find the editing?
- Did you find the lip-syncing effective?
- How cohesive did you find the music video with the digipak and poster?
- Do you think there was a good balance of screen time given to the performer and narrative elements?
Saturday, 7 March 2015
Feedback Survey
Please could you take my survey regarding the music video, poster and digipak for the song 'Mirrors' by Justin Timberlake.
Friday, 6 March 2015
Production Log - Feedback
Now my products complete and at most only require minor adjustment, I have started to consider gaining audience feedback. This is required so that I can assess whether my products are effective.
Therefore, I am considering ways I can gain this audience feedback.
I intend to make a survey using the online software 'SurveyMonkey'. Their basic package will allow me to ask up to 10 questions, which should make an effective survey. Any longer than this, and some people may be put off from taking the survey by its length.
I also intend to hold a focus group, using both males and females, to gain their feedback on the video. It will be easier to gain qualitative data from the focus group, whereas the survey will generate much more effective quantitative data.
Another way I aim to get audience feedback is through sharing my music video on multiple social networks such as Facebook and Twitter. YouTube also has many devices that can help me assess the effectiveness of the video, and I aim to utilize this, as drafts of my video have been uploaded to YouTube and the final version will also be.
Therefore, I am considering ways I can gain this audience feedback.
I intend to make a survey using the online software 'SurveyMonkey'. Their basic package will allow me to ask up to 10 questions, which should make an effective survey. Any longer than this, and some people may be put off from taking the survey by its length.
I also intend to hold a focus group, using both males and females, to gain their feedback on the video. It will be easier to gain qualitative data from the focus group, whereas the survey will generate much more effective quantitative data.
Another way I aim to get audience feedback is through sharing my music video on multiple social networks such as Facebook and Twitter. YouTube also has many devices that can help me assess the effectiveness of the video, and I aim to utilize this, as drafts of my video have been uploaded to YouTube and the final version will also be.
Thursday, 5 March 2015
Thursday, 26 February 2015
Production Log - Permission to Use Song
As I am using the song 'Mirrors' by Justin Timberlake to produce my music video, I will need to request permission to use it. I do not own this content, therefore I do not have the right to use it unless I have permission from the company who own the song.
For this reason, I will need to look into who I should contact in order to gain such permission. This is most likely going to be an individual working for the RCA Records label that Justin Timberlake is signed with.
For this reason, I will need to look into who I should contact in order to gain such permission. This is most likely going to be an individual working for the RCA Records label that Justin Timberlake is signed with.
Monday, 16 February 2015
Sunday, 15 February 2015
Wednesday, 4 February 2015
Production Log - Second Shoot with Performer
Yesterday, I shot with my performer, Nick DeCruz, again, in the black box studio. I experimented with lighting, taking pictures for my digipak and shooting new video for my music video. This time, I had a clearer idea of exactly what I wanted the shots to look like, as I already had a reference (the previous shoot) from which I could work out what looked good the first time, making sure to include these elements the second time around.
For example, Nick blew a kiss to the camera in the first shoot, which was incredibly effective, therefore we did several takes of this the second time so that I could choose the best one for my music video.
For example, Nick blew a kiss to the camera in the first shoot, which was incredibly effective, therefore we did several takes of this the second time so that I could choose the best one for my music video.
Overall, I felt this shoot was productive, and I am pleased with the results.
Below are a couple of pictures, taken during the shoot, which show the set up I used.
Tuesday, 27 January 2015
Request for Permission
Above is a screenshot of the email I sent to Johnny Wright's assistant. Wright is Justin Timberlake's manager. I need to obtain this permission in order to use the song in my coursework.
Production Log - Feedback
Today, I have received feedback on my first edit, with ideas for improvement.
Firstly, as a slow and longer than average song, I need to make sure that my video is quick paced, so that the video does not get boring or repetitive.
Secondly, I need to make my video more fragmented. My first draft has a linear narrative, with each verse or chorus beginning a new 'stage' in the video. Maybe putting quick future or past shots could illeviate this issue.
Another thing I need to look into is the colour correction, which I have already started working on. I am hoping to give the shots at the beginning a warm tone and create a colder tone at the end to reflect their inner turmoil, more outwardly expressed by The Different Character's movements.
Furthermore, the shots of The Shopaholic character at the beginning are a bit bland. I have ideas to improve them to make them more interesting, and to create less segmentation in the first verse. At the moment, it feels very organized in a 'character 1, character 2, character 3...' format. Having several shorter shots of The Shopaholic will mean that I can rearrange the first verse in a way that appears more random.
Lastly, some of the lighting used in the shots of my performer are too light, and this tends to wash him out and make him look very pale. This contrasts greatly to the shots of him that don't have such light, as the colours are a lot stronger.
Firstly, as a slow and longer than average song, I need to make sure that my video is quick paced, so that the video does not get boring or repetitive.
Secondly, I need to make my video more fragmented. My first draft has a linear narrative, with each verse or chorus beginning a new 'stage' in the video. Maybe putting quick future or past shots could illeviate this issue.
Another thing I need to look into is the colour correction, which I have already started working on. I am hoping to give the shots at the beginning a warm tone and create a colder tone at the end to reflect their inner turmoil, more outwardly expressed by The Different Character's movements.
Furthermore, the shots of The Shopaholic character at the beginning are a bit bland. I have ideas to improve them to make them more interesting, and to create less segmentation in the first verse. At the moment, it feels very organized in a 'character 1, character 2, character 3...' format. Having several shorter shots of The Shopaholic will mean that I can rearrange the first verse in a way that appears more random.
Lastly, some of the lighting used in the shots of my performer are too light, and this tends to wash him out and make him look very pale. This contrasts greatly to the shots of him that don't have such light, as the colours are a lot stronger.
Monday, 19 January 2015
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